上平九佳----四式

流水高山 · 发表于 2019-1-14 08:21

上平九佳----四式

山斋春暮

门前万亩槐，风过醉吾斋。耄耋分茶乐，儿童扑蝶乖。

临窗询韵律，伏案斗棋牌。四美屠苏热，二难同放怀。

神州雾霾

小寒无雪雨，万物秽尘埋。梅蕾如干豆，杨枝若束柴。

烟囱桑苑立，稀矿稻田排。地裂山崩日，回头可有涯。

悠哉漏斋

读易杜康筛，夕阳窥漏斋。百灵鸣竹苑，络纬唱苔阶。

习篆师周鼎，寻香看刺槐。汲泉龙井品，韵雅自开怀。

谷雨远足

院外流苏绽，丘山碧雪埋。黄鹂鸣竹圃，粉蝶入书斋。

淑气村头郁，游云岭岫徘。青梅花下煮，主客尽开怀。

无名 · 发表于 2019-1-14 11:55

赏学问好您

无名 · 发表于 2019-1-14 11:55

赏学问好您

流水高山 · 发表于 2019-1-14 11:57

无名发表于 2019-1-14 11:55
赏学问好您

谢谢先生垂赏

俞来 · 发表于 2019-1-15 08:43

四美屠苏热，二难同放怀。

流水高山 · 发表于 2019-1-15 09:00

俞来发表于 2019-1-15 08:43
四美屠苏热，二难同放怀。

谢谢先生垂赏

无名 · 发表于 2019-1-15 15:28

赏学佳作，问好您

俞来 · 发表于 2019-1-18 08:14

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流水高山 · 发表于 2019-1-18 08:44

俞来发表于 2019-1-18 08:14
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拙作恳求师友指点，角度不同,可以讨论.

流水高山 · 发表于 2019-1-18 08:45

无名发表于 2019-1-15 15:28
赏学佳作，问好您

拙作恳求师友指点，角度不同,可以讨论.

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