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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-18 07:23 | 显示全部楼层
美女勝景

細嫩肌膚,黛嬌笑靨,堪比明月柔姿,美恬而脫俗
纖濃韻味,腰軟金鈿,可依桃花弱態,佳色最相宜
除飛乳燕,絮舞蕉綠,引人溪光瀲瀲,蕩漾其誰在
婉轉啼鶯,蘭芳荔紅,閑苑柳影依依,婆娑為汝癡

注:第一四句羅志海作,第二三句葉葉新作。


A Beauty In The Wonderful Scenery

Her delicate skin
her charming eyebrows and her smiling dimples
as soft as the posture of the moon
beautiful and refined out from vulgarity

In slender and strong flavor of rhyme
her waist is soft and the gold is inlaid
it can depend on the weak state of the peach blossom
the best color is suitable

Unflying young swallows
the catkins dancing and bananas is green
light of the stream attracting people
who there ripples?

Gently singing of warblers
orchids are fragrant and litchis are red
in the idle garden, the willow shadows are reluctant to part
whirling for you being intoxicated


Note: first and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second and third sentences by Ye Yexin.

3/17/2020格律體新詩 ● 二十一絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Twenty-one Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9688首對聯體詩
The 9,688th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內有幾十位詩人參與創作。
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-charming-moon/#content

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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-18 07:12 | 显示全部楼层
动情

一盏斟出唐宋韵
七绝洋溢海天风
娥眉频扫缘君意
肝胆相连为我情


Estrus

Seven words of quatrain overflows wind in the sea and the sky
Pour out rhymes of Tang and Song in a wine cup
The beautiful eyebrows look again and again for you
Liver and gall are connected for my love

4/17/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9905首对联体诗
The 9,905th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/romantic-adventures/
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罗志海 发表于 2020-4-18 07:12
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一盏斟出唐宋韵

对仗工整,“频扫”、“相连”,动情之意凸现!
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-26 15:58 | 显示全部楼层
丽景

笔下青山多稳重
梦中黛玉好温柔
东风幸会桃花雨
琴曲绕萦燕子楼


Beautiful Scenery
  
The green mountain under the pen was so steady
Daiyu in the dream was so tender
The east wind was lucky to see the Peach Blossom Rain
The lute music was lingering around the Swallow Tower

4/25/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9957首对联体诗
The 9,957th Two Pairs of Couplets
后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... -landscape/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
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发表于 2020-5-1 11:11 | 显示全部楼层
笔下青山多稳重
梦中黛玉好温柔
东风幸会桃花雨
琴曲绕萦燕子楼----对仗工整,想象好丰富!的确是丽景!
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