出其不意

罗志海

出其不意

谁铸朝阳成火炬
君磨新月试吴钩
名牌立志多情趣
精品有心争上游

By Surprise

Who made the morning sun into a torch?
You sharpened the new moon as a Wu hook and tried it
Famous brand aspired to be sentimental
High quality products were eager to compete for the upper reaches

9/1/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第10663首对联体诗 The 10,663th Two Pairs of Couplets
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/red-and-green/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... e-c8dd7b732ad0.html

liping

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江水如蓝

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