秋景

罗志海

秋景

遥遥近近，繁花落尽秋声近
短短长长，人字悬空雁阵长
水山明媚，一水一山一世界
情景温馨，此情此景此风光


The Autumn Scene

Far and near
all full-blown flowers fell and the autumn sound near
Short and long
man word hanging in the sky and the wild goose array was long

Beautiful water and mountain
one water, one mountain and one world
Warm scene
this situation, this scene and this scenery

9/11/2020格律体新诗 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第10728首对联体诗 The 10,728th Two Pairs of Couplets
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/half-a-cup-of-autumn/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... e-c8dd7b732ad0.html

盛世红颜

欣赏佳作！感佩才情！问好诗友，祝您笔耕愉快。

王加华

欣赏佳作！

罗志海

盛世红颜 发表于 2020-9-14 21:47
欣赏佳作！感佩才情！问好诗友，祝您笔耕愉快。

谢谢诗友关爱鼓励！早上好！！

罗志海

暮色

才把夕阳拖下水
又将莲叶染成红
时来翠岭升明月
遁去烽烟见彩虹

格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
第10994首对联体诗 2020年11月17日


The Dusk Scenery

Just the sunset was dragged down into the water
The lotus leaves were dyed red also
It’s time, from the green ridge, the moon rose
The beacon smoke escaped and appeared the rainbow

Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 10,994th Two Pairs of Couplets, 11/17/2020
http://www.swsm.net/thread-574568-1-1.html

林音独韵

拜读佳作，文笔流畅，声韵和诣，构思巧妙，语言生动，想想力丰富。遥祝冬祺笔丰！