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金梁

欣赏诗友佳作---对联体诗，学习点赞

罗志海

金梁 发表于 2019-10-13 19:29
欣赏诗友佳作---对联体诗，学习点赞

谢谢诗友的赞!

罗志海

山居岁月

深山眠冷月
古庙噪寒鸦
愁处听风雨
乐时烹酒茶


Years Of Living On Mountains

In the deep mountain, slept a cold moon
Around the ancient temple, the cold crows were noisy
In the sorrowful place, I listened to rain and wind
In the happy time, I cooked wine and tea

10/13/2019格律体新诗 ● 五绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Five Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9188首对联体诗
The 9,188th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/colours-of-lake/

赵梦

拜读了中文部分佳作，英文部分看不懂。

赵梦

拜读了中文部分佳作，英文部分看不懂。

罗志海

谢谢阅读！

罗志海

人生的奥秘

天朗气清花耀眼
风狂雨骤燕归巢
人生到底一抔土
你我懒得半世劳


Mysteries Of Life

The wind blew hard and the rain came down in sheets
swallows returned their nests
Flowers were dazzling
the sky was clear and bright

After all, life is a pile of soil
You and I lazy to be tied in half a life

12/13/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9195首对联体诗
The 9,195th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/decomposed-hatchet-handles/

罗志海

情深義厚重

我行將就木，密友們不須為我過度悲傷哭泣
君此刻離塵，知音者難免因君非常寂寞彷徨
愛摯情深沉，纖絲愛傾海還來生情愛再延續
恩高義厚重，滴水恩湧泉報現世義恩難淡忘

注：第一三四句羅志海作，第二句貓頭鷹作。


Love Is Deep And Personal Loyalty Is Thick And Heavy

At this moment when you are away from the world
it's hard for my confidants
they are very lonely in hesitation for you
I'm dying
my close friends for me
need not sadly cry

Your deep love
I pour out sea water to return your silk love
we will continue to love in next life
Your grace and personal loyalty are high, thick and heavy
I repay a drop of water of grace with fountain
I don’t forget grace and personal loyalty this life


Note: first, third and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second sentence by Maotouying.

12/17/2019格律體新詩 ● 十八絕 羅志海譯
Metric New Poetry ● Eighteen Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第9212首對聯體詩
The 9,212th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/elegant-incense/#content

罗志海

美哉月色琴聲

對荷香點綴，漾魄清波心意暖
看竹影婆娑，凝輝皓月賦詩靈
傾蓋幾丹青，依依澹蕩珠璣葉
繞梁三日夜，處處悠揚琴瑟聲

注：第一三句葉葉新作，第二四句羅志海作。


Moonlight And Sound Of Zither Are Beautiful!

Ornamenting to the lotus fragrances
the clear waves ripple souls and hearts warm
Seeing shadows of bamboos whirling
the bright moon agglutination of brillianc with the clever poetry

Around the beam for three days and nights
the sound of se and zither is melodious everywhere
A few red and green tilting
pearl leaves reluctant to part are fluttering


Note: first and third sentences by Ye Yexin
Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

12/24/2019格律體新詩 ● 十一絕 羅志海譯
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第9238首對聯體詩
The 9,238th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-fillip/#content

罗志海

欣賞

品梅先賞雪白
聽雨卻聞荷香
筆瘦詩心懶惰
情濃曲意悠長


Enjoyed

Before tasting the plum flowers
I first enjoyed the snow white
When I listened to the rain
but I smelled the lotus fragrance

A pen is thin
a poetry heart is lazy
Feelings are strong
moods of music are long

12/29/2019格律體新詩 ● 六絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Six Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9262首對聯體詩
The 9,262th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/brief-3/#content

罗志海

声音的魅力

北海三潮咆哮波涛卷无垠掀巨浪
黄河九曲猿声峡谷催浩瀚壮豪情
风骚辞赋打通灵感处处张扬魅力
婉转歌喉陶冶性情时时涤荡心灵

注：第一三句钱永德作，第二四句罗志海作。


The Charm Of Voice

Three tides in the North China Sea roar waves
roll the limitlessness and lift the huge billows
In the nine bends of the Yellow River
the ape sounds in gorge urge the vastness and expand lofty sentiments

Feng, Sao, Ci and Fu opening up inspiration
in everywhere, showing charm
At all times euphemistic singing cleansing the mind
molding temperament

Note: first and third sentences by Qian Yongde.
Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

3/3/2020格律体新诗 ● 十四绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Fourteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9568首对联体诗
The 9,568th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则（草稿）》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html写作，每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等，共四句（绝句），是一种格律体新诗。目前国内有几十位诗人参与创作。
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/river-and-lake/#content

罗志海

俠影柔情

紅顏書劍海天游，豪傑飄飄俠影
翠竹琴弦山水曲，美眉脈脈柔情
慈善連綿盈世界，修身徳厚為上
鐘聲繚繞醒人間，禮佛心誠則靈

注：第一三句清溪觀魚作，第二四句羅志海作。


Chivalrous Figure And Tender Affection

Red face, book and sword touring between the sea and the sky
a hero’s flying chivalrous figure
Green bamboo and zither string playing the landscape music
a beauty full of tender affection

Charity is continuous in the world
and self-cultivation is the best thing
The bells coiling up to wake the world
venerate the Buddha
work only when one believes in it sincerely

Note: first and third sentences by Qingxiguanyu.
Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

4/8/2020格律體新詩 ● 十三絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Thirteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9868首對聯體詩
The 9,868th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則（草稿）》寫作，每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等，共四句（絕句），是一種格律體新詩。目前國內已有幾十位詩人參與創作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... -landscape/#content

金梁

再次赏学佳作，祝春祺笔丰

罗志海

金梁 发表于 2020-4-10 22:27
再次赏学佳作，祝春祺笔丰

谢谢诗友!

罗志海

欣赏

诗可以舒心美乐
花没能耀眼常开
窗前红鸟啁啾去
月下乌篷欸乃来


Enjoyable

Poetry can be enjoyable and beautiful
Flowers can't bloom dazzlingly always
In front of the window, the red bird was chirping away
Below the moon
the creak of oars of the black tarpaulin boat came

4/11/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9872首对联体诗
The 9,872th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则（草稿）》写作，每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等，共四句（绝句），是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... onsulation/#content

罗志海

原因

天边云妹俏丽
树上杏儿脆甜
醉我非因酒故
迷君本是花缘


Because Of

Apricots in the tree are crisp and sweet
A cloud girl is pretty in the horizon
I'm not drunk because of alcohol
You in love is because of flowers, this is the reason

4/21/2020格律體新詩 ● 六絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Six Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9929首對聯體詩
The 9,929th Two Pairs of Couplets
後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則（草稿）》寫作，每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等，共四句（絕句），是一種格律體新詩。目前國內已有幾十位詩人參與創作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/wonderful-beads/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html